RPGM Completed Tail of Desire [v2023.09.21] [BLUE BONE]

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sptl7435

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130db7814 said:
Just played through the new Nitt scene. I took what the other guys said with a grain of salt but it's true, it was pretty bad. Terrible setup and not much effort was put into writing the scene it seems. Also, did anyone else also see the fade to black between CG changes or was it just me? Just the art is nice but coupled with the generic type of lines you'd expect from an unnamed npc, it was kinda disappointing. I hope they'll take some feedback and polish that scene a bit more. Write in a scene where the pig turns around and his dick accidentally slaps Nitt's face and got her in heat or something. Even that trashy porno style setup would've been better.
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how did you get the new scenes?
 
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Poganka

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Before that, I appreciated the pictures and the visual part is very good. Like the previous commentator, I was skeptical of those who didn't like it, but now I watched this scene in the game along with the dialogues and that's what I can say. The logic of Nitt, the usual, let's assume she does not learn from mistakes. But there is a problem with dialogues, everything happens very quickly and crumpled. The dialogues are small and boring, it is clear that they were written in an hour. Because of this, all interest is lost. A little disappointed, I hope that the dialogues will be rewritten.
 
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130db7814

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sptl7435 said:
how did you get the new scenes?
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I think you have to be doing the milk grandma quest first, in the final part of that you're sent to go to the Giant Forest, the place with the guild. Enter Madame Butterfly's tent and lockpick the crate. After that the pig slave will escape and once you go back to the starting village an NPC will be in front of the "hotel" and you can talk to her about stolen food, go to the storehouse next to Nitt's house, and then go back to the NPC. The scene will start immediately after.
 
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ArsenHumby

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Poganka said:
Before that, I appreciated the pictures and the visual part is very good. Like the previous commentator, I was skeptical of those who didn't like it, but now I watched this scene in the game along with the dialogues and that's what I can say. The logic of Nitt, the usual, let's assume she does not learn from mistakes. But there is a problem with dialogues, everything happens very quickly and crumpled. The dialogues are small and boring, it is clear that they were written in an hour. Because of this, all interest is lost. A little disappointed, I hope that the dialogues will be rewritten.
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Sadly we would need more people commenting about this things on the discord if we wanna see a change or a rewrite but most people there are ghosts so kinda difficult but not impossible.
 
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naibreezy

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130db7814 said:
I think you have to be doing the milk grandma quest first, in the final part of that you're sent to go to the Giant Forest, the place with the guild. Enter Madame Butterfly's tent and lockpick the crate. After that the pig slave will escape and once you go back to the starting village an NPC will be in front of the "hotel" and you can talk to her about stolen food, go to the storehouse next to Nitt's house, and then go back to the NPC. The scene will start immediately after.
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think it would have been a lot better if the scene was Madame Butterfly had forced the escaped pig slave on Nitt and correct me if I'm wrong but Madame Butterfly holds a grudge against Nitt.
Also could be an NTR(actually voyeurism) route and to make it better could be 2 paths one where you have NTR(actually Voyeurism) route and another where you stop Madame and get even more scenes for Madame.
10x better than what we got.
 
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naibreezy said:
think it would have been a lot better if the scene was Madame Butterfly had forced the escaped pig slave on Nitt and correct me if I'm wrong but Madame Butterfly holds a grudge against Nitt.
Also could be an NTR(actually voyeurism) route and to make it better could be 2 paths one where you have NTR(actually Voyeurism) route and another where you stop Madame and get even more scenes for Madame.
10x better than what we got.
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Well the sidequest happened after you meet Madame Butterfly and she had her scene with the pig slave so there wasn't a grudge between them "yet". For me the only thing this scene needed was:
1) A scene of how bad the pig slave was living and why he scaped, showing him going to the first village. Showing or talking about how he can no longer talk and how most people took pity on him
2) Nitt, after the MC finish finding all the clues of the pig slave, finds the pig slave in a really bad state and she taking pitty on him and probably bonding with him and taking him to her house and helping him.
3) After this you could find the pig slave in Nitt's house and Nitt talking how he is a good boy and why she takes care of him and later in the night maybe the NTR scene but with more lines. Probably Erick watching from the windows and seeing the scene.
 
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naibreezy

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BaamTwo said:
Well the sidequest happened after you meet Madame Butterfly and she had her scene with the pig slave so there wasn't a grudge between them "yet". For me the only thing this scene needed was:
1) A scene of how bad the pig slave was living and why he scaped, showing him going to the first village. Showing or talking about how he can no longer talk and how most people took pity on him
2) Nitt, after the MC finish finding all the clues of the pig slave, finds the pig slave in a really bad state and she taking pitty on him and probably bonding with him and taking him to her house and helping him.
3) After this you could find the pig slave in Nitt's house and Nitt talking how he is a good boy and why she takes care of him and later in the night maybe the NTR scene but with more lines. Probably Erick watching from the windows and seeing the scene.
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eh kinda boring BUT still better than what we got, also more Madame scenes would be cool tho
 
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130db7814

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BaamTwo said:
That's the funny thing, Madame was also going to get a scene on one of Asa's WIP.
Also the scene of Nitt and the pig slave was already a thing since 2020.
These pictures are from Asa, part of the official discord

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That Nitt picture with the kissing would've been a better reference to use for the actual scene. Nitt looking like she's not into it at first, instead of just going "wow living dildo, score!" immediately like what we got. Also that sketch for Madame Butterfly looks so good, I wish it was in the game.
 
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L4r90

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sooo which version is the up-to-date one? Based on the file name it's either 705 or the uncensored one which only tells you it's uncensored
 
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